obey my wishes
like you always do
give me seeds
like you always do.
Sunday
You’ll wear your Christmas cloth –pink blouse tucked into a sky-blue skirt that will hang slightly above your knees as you walk down the street of Ipata. You’ll brush sides with people; some, as fast as a passing wind and some, as slow as a car with a dying battery. You’ll hiss at the old man that’ll whistle at you. Smile at the lady that’ll call you pretty. Frown at the boy that’ll touch your breast and dash into the crowd like a daytime thief. You’ll heave when you finally make the turn that’ll take you to The Church.
The pastor will be standing on the pulpit, his bald head will reflect the fluorescent bulb that’ll hang above him, and as he shouts, Praise-da-lord! His reverberating voice will touch the souls of the people sitting in the hall and they’ll chorus, Halleluiah! You’ll have missed a lot; the opening sermon and the choir hymns. Still, you’ll find a seat and cross your legs.
“The world will end in a few days, Gbadura!” the pastor’s prophecy won’t have time to breathe out of his tongue when the congregation will jump into prayer. The service will end and you’ll walk through the street of Ipata, again, it’ll be empty and the air will smell of wood-smoke, of death.
Monday
The smell of akara will hang in the air, the smell of the living. You’ll find your way to Kalunga’s shrine. You’ll hold a nylon of two live chickens that’ll wriggle and cluck. When you get there, you will remove your shoes before you step on the palm frond mat.
“Trisha, why are you here?” Kalunga’s raspy voice will seal the tiny room full of red and white pieces of cloth. Your body will quiver as you drop the nylon of chickens. You’ll watch them wriggle, cluck, and disappear into thin air. Till now, everything you have ever wished for had come to pass and if the world was ending you don’t wish to end with it.
“I want my wrinkles to disappear, my money to grow, and my life to never end,” you will whisper into the palms of Kalunga. His palms will glow into your face and he will give you his lines.
Tuesday
The T.V will be full of news, people are mysteriously disappearing. You’ll light your room with incense sticks, a flavor that smells of emptiness. You’ll be braless when you look at yourself in the mirror, you’ll look nothing like forty-three. You’ll call Musa over the phone, and tell him you need prayers. When he opens the door, you’ll chant the lines Kalunga gave you. Musa, with the perfect torso, height, and complexion will open his mouth at the sight of your breasts. His heart will pound between his thighs. He’ll try to run, but the door will not open. You’ll jump on him and make him jab his waist into yours on the sofa. His body will shiver and he’ll disappear as soon as he comes. Your thighs will bleed semen and as you wait for Wednesday to come, you’ll chime the verses again.
obey my wishes
like you always do
give me seeds
like you always do.
About The Author
Mustapha Enesi writes short stories from Nigeria. His works have appeared in The Kalahari Review, The Story Tree Challenge Maiden Anthology and elsewhere.
Eboquills
Related posts
3 Comments
Leave a Reply Cancel reply
This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
The story is catching and as the Editorial has rightfully said: “interestingly explosive”. For a moment, I thought the story would lengthen into a week, at least for the climax and denouement, but the author did that in just three days; it is just amazing.
I think the plot in Sunday and Monday is as realistic as the author had put it and had decided to leave it; the clash of our archaic belief and our foreign belief (say, a clash between Westernization and Nativity, Tradition and Religion, Culture and Doctrine, etc.) In our particular African setting, the fusion of these values may be similar; and in the long run we realize that those who can’t synonymously work them over will certainly be in rift with one over the other (e.g Eugene’s evaluation of his Father as something below his standards of higher worship: Purple Hibiscus by CNA).
So, to me, I believe the resolution of this wonderful short story is mostly as it is portrayed here; trying to create a synonymity between them, even though critically, we know that they are not synonymous.
I like the story; but I just pray that Osun Sengese, goddess of fertility, bestow on the childless the fruit of the womb.
And may Allah or God of the Jews, bring children in bundles to the barren.
Asee.
Amen.
Ameén.
I like you already! And you have eyes. And thank you. And Amen!
[…] Read Also: Trisha: A Short Story By Mustapha Enesi […]